Kamis, 02 Oktober 2014

Mr.Been Got Up Late
Haii...........

         Mr. Been had a schedule to go to dentist at 9 o’clock. But he got up late. His watch already ring very loud, but the didn’t  hear  until he droped his watch to a glass of water. After he get up, he dried  a watch in the clothes line. The schedule was hang up in his clothes before he looked it. Then he went to dentist with panic, so he brought a clothes and a brick. He wear a clothes while he controlled is car with leg. He brushed his teeth in the car too.
Finally, he come to dentist and parked his car by push other car behind his car.

Thank's for reading friend...................:)

2 komentar:

  1. but the didn’t hear until he droped = but he didn’t hear until he dropped
    After he get up = After he got up

    BalasHapus
  2. Mr. Been had a schedule to go to dentist at 9 o’clock. But he got up late.= please make compound sentences ( Mr. Been had a schedule to go to dentist at 9 o’clock, but he got up late)
    His watch already ring very loud = His watch already rings very loud

    BalasHapus